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Protagonist guide of life 1 by ~the-sannin-rox:iconthe-sannin-rox:



In this bible, you shall find the great story of the Protaganists and how they're religion developed.  You'll first read from where it first began to the point where the 3 powerful gods of Nepal/Egypt/Brazil were reincarnated into 3 teenage girls of Minnesota.  The journey all began when a strange but beautiful girl with rare blue eyes was found abandoned and brought to Tic tic and the Unicorn's village.  

Verse 1, the meeting of Evanette

The crowd of tribespeople glared at the girl warily, suspecting black magic or trickery from those blue eyes.  She glanced around once, before wincing and returning her gaze to the floor, petrified.  After a long while of this agonizing silence, an elderly lady came into the tent and at once, the tent switched from silence to a frenzied uproar.  The lady took in a deep breath before calling out some ancient tribal curses.  The tent receded back to silence once more, and the people moved aside as she made her way to the center of the tent where the girl stood aghast.

"Child, what is you're name?"  The old lady asked, her old and weary voice full of compassion.

"Evanette."  She whispered, finding the courage to look up into this kindred woman's eyes.  The elderly lady gasped at how blue this girls eyes were, and recognized them at once as the eyes that could forsee all.

"Fear not!"  The shaman lady yelled to the crowd of tribe members.  "This child is the foretold prophet!  From her, we will learn many great things!"  The crowd errupted into cheer and the woman rested her hands on Evanette's shoulders.  As soon as her aged fingers touched the girls shoulders, images came flashing across her mind.  Four legged demons, which, under man's control, destroyed all of this child's village.  Men who were controlling these beasts and all so they could find this girl!  Fire burning houses down, faces of children screaming.  Before long, the woman released Evanette's shoulders as though they were poisoned, and she stumbled backwards, breathing hard and fast.  She would have fallen to the ground, had not her loyal tribe members caught her whilst staring at the girl with menace, save for one.  A young boy, perhaps the same age as this Evanette stared at her with wonder and admiration.  They briefly met each others gaze before looking away quickly.  Meanwhile, Old Mother, regained her composture and rose to her feet.

"Four legged monsters!"  The woman found she could not bring herself to say everything else she had seen.  The crowd looked at her with perplexion but she made a gesture of dismissal before they could press questions, and reluctantly they obliged.  Gradually they all exited the tent, save for Evanette who was pulled aside by wise Old Mother.

"We need to talk, dear."  Old mother said quietly.

Verse 1:2 The Unicorn's meeting of Evanette.

After a week, The Unicorn had followed Evanette more than he had ever followed anyone in his life, and was proud to claim that he hadn't been caught both by her or anyone else whatsoever.  He smirked to himself at this thought, as me moved aside the branches of the bush that was in his way of seeing Evanette bathing.  Suddenly, however, he felt a cold calloused hand grip his shoulder, and he jumped and fell over backwards in surprise, before looking up to see the face of his old friend Tic tic.  

"What are you doing, Unicorn?"  He asked as he raised an eyebrow.

"Nothing, just go away, man!"  Unicorn hissed in anger, as he spun around to resume his looking but jumped again when he found himself face to face with Evanette.  

"What are you doing?"  She asked warily, as she adjusted the hide that was her outfit.  At once, Tic tic began to snicker and folded his arms and looked away.

"So that's what you were doing!"  He exclaimed, clearly enjoying what he was seeing.  Unicorn's face began to heat and Evanette drew her eyebrows together in confusion.

"Tell me what you were doing!"  She stated sharply, wanting answers now.  

"I was...uh, well I needed to talk to you, and I was on my way to you're hut, and I found you here.  I knew it wasn't a good time, so I was about to turn around and head back home."  Unicorn made up on the spot.  She must have bought it for her gaze softened into a delicate sort of surprise, and she nodded.

"Sure, if you wanna talk we could do it now."

"I'd love too,"  He glanced murderously at Tic tic, who's eyes widened in surprise before rolling them and walking away.  As soon as he was out of earshot, Unicorn found himself staring at Evanette, entranced by her beauty as always.  She arched an eyebrow at him in confusion, and he instantly snapped out of his reverie.  

"So...What did you come here to talk about?"

"I don't know, I just wanted to talk....can I do that?"  He asked with a small chuckle.  She smiled faintly and nodded.  

"Of course."  They both sat down on a large boulder and stared at the sun as it slowly receded into the horizon, and cast millions of glowing orange reflections off of the azure lake below them.  

"Well, I guess I was wondering, why were you abandoned.  I mean, what happened?"  Unicorn finally asked, unable to find better ways to phrase that question.

"Men riding these 4 legged monsters destroyed our tribe.  They said it was in the way of they're plans or something.  They also said I had some sort of prophetic talent, but they couldn't figure out how to access it or something, and I was cast aside."  Evanette explained quietly.

"How could they do that to someone so beautiful?"  Unicorn asked in genuine perplexion as he turned to face Evanette.  A blush rose to her round cheeks and she shyly tucked a piece of her long brunette hair behind her ear, enabling him to see the light of the sun that reflected off her icy eyes, creating a breathtaking sight.

"You really think I'm beautiful?"  She replied after a long moment.  Without thinking, Unicorn found himself reaching over to grab Evanette's hand.  She jumped at the touch, causing him to jump in turn as well, but ultimately they met each others gaze with a content smile.

"I truly do.  You're a thousand times more beautiful than this sunset right here.  And I can assure you, Evanette, that you'll always have a place in my heart."  She searched the boy's eyes, in an ecstatic sort of disbelief.  She instantly found sincerity, and knowing that he was telling nothing more than the truth, her blush grew fiercer and she looked back on the sunset, unable to find the words to reply to his confession of love.  Unicorn wasn't expecting a reply, and patiently turned to face the sunset, watching it hand in hand with his beloved, Evanette.
©2008-2010 ~the-sannin-rox
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Author's Comments

I know this is short, but I figure it's best to get the intro part out of the way. Because after this it picks up with the Mammoth riding ostriches, and it's pretty action packed.
And the way we made fun of the movie 10,000 BC wasn't suited for story format, so I'll be adding a lot of things to keep it storyish, but I'll be keeping everything we made fun of even if it's in subtle ways. Because, I jotted stuff down when I got back down from the movie and it looked like this:
Evanette gets taken to the stupid city, her great great grandaunt or something predicts that four legged demons will destroy the world, and the unicorn promptly vows to protect her with his life. A time skip goes by, and the unicorn and his best friend, Tic tic, fight and eventually take on the mammoths. The unicorn was greeted warmly by villagers and they partied about his killing of one, but evanette or whatever finds out that he lied and she leaves him in the dust. She ends up getting kidnapped by some wierd bald guy who grunts and offers her water. Meanwhile, Tic tic and the Unicorn are fighting scary ostratche/chickens and tic tic almost dies. The great great grandaunt saves him and they realize that there are enemies trying to control all the neiboring villages. So together they go through random plot changes and scenery changes and battle sabertoothed lions or tigers, go to Egypt, and find the unicorns blind father who rose from the earth dead, and then became alive, while also meeting the banana chin people and the Bamboo Creatures, who have the ability to make walls whereever and whenever they want betch.
So while that crap is happening Evanette is all like Ima kill my captor! but before she could, the mastermind controlled her and she almost killed Tic tic with the black penis. But in the end one of her captors killed him with an even greater penis. The unicorn, devastated over the loss of the love of his life that he never realized until then, vowed to fight on for his sake and to protect his other love Evanatte, seemingly forgetting his love slave Big will. In the end they fight, and win and it's cool beans.

So now you know why I had to modify it a bit. XD
So yeah, I'll explain what I can now.

The unicorn = The main character. Forgot his real name...but he earned the term "Unicorn" When he had this horn thing around his neck and he lifted it up and I thought it was growing out of his head...So we'll just address him as Unicorn. Maybe he'll get a name by the end of the story.

Tic tic - The Unicorns best friend...and maybe more. He looks like Jesus, only with a gray beard, and I pointed that out. But we didn't know his name until they were like "Ask Tic tic." And I'm like "Jesus's name is Tic tic?! Whoa, I've been wrong for so many years!" And we started joking around like "Did you pray to Tic tic tonight." "Ah man, I forgot!" "Who doesn't pray to Tic tic!" He's smart and has more common sense than Unicorn.

Evanette - I didn't know what her name was until the end of the movie...and even now, I'm pretty sure it's wrong. So most times, I just address her as "That chick" or "Evanette or whatever her name is" XD She's not as damselly in distress as she seems, although she is my least favorite. But she's a major part of our Protagonist way of life, so she's okay.

Old mother - The shaman lady of their Tribe. We later find out she has special ties with Evanette. And not in a pervy way, Honest!

Other character profiles to come when I get to them.
Disclaimer: All general ideas deriving from 10,000 BC belong to the screenplay writer and producer. You guys rock!
The unicorn and other names given to characters: Me and my pals! XD

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:iconsee03:
Lmao, I like Tic Tic already XDDD
Pretty awesome so far! I cant wait for the next part.

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Your mom's so fat, even Naruto doesn't BELIEVE IT
:iconthe-sannin-rox:
Lol, yep, Tic tic is hilarious. Not so much in the actual movie...because he's more seriousish, but for the point of the story, I'm gonna make there be a reason for his seriousness later on. :shrug:
And thanks for the fave, darlin'!

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'Hey woodwinds!"
"Yo!"
"Shut up!"
-Waconia Brass
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"Friendship is like peeing you're pants. Everyone can see it, but only you get that warm fuzzy feeling that trickles down your leg."
-David
:iconsee03:
Cool beans. And no problemo~

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Your mom's so fat, even Naruto doesn't BELIEVE IT
:iconrockleeroxs:
that was amazing but you know what would make it better?

THE BAMBOO CREATURES!!!!!

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AHAHAH!!!
OMG WHAT?
I ate them out of order
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Frosted cheerios are my herios
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even though so far apart ik ur here inside my heart the distance long through toil and shame it feels so good to hear ur name
:iconlemonloveswmb:
WOOO GO UNICORN, yea thats rite betch thats me. that is the best guide/bible in the whole world. the protagonist/pirates will rule the world just wait and see...
:iconthe-sannin-rox:
Hellz yeah! :D

--
'Hey woodwinds!"
"Yo!"
"Shut up!"
-Waconia Brass
--
"Friendship is like peeing you're pants. Everyone can see it, but only you get that warm fuzzy feeling that trickles down your leg."
-David
:iconpsyping:
It doesn't feel very bible-ish, neither in content or writing style, but it does have a very different style than usual. And aside the confusion (I thought Unicorn was actually a unicorn, and the time jumps are confusing) I think it was brilliant. :)

Also, yay for the romantic tone.

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I'm never serious. Seriously.
:iconthe-sannin-rox:
Lol...yeah. I'm not going for professionalism on this one...or like any of my other stories to be honest. ^^;
And yeah, this is a het story and it's nothing distasteful so you should enjoy the romance to come. XD

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'Hey woodwinds!"
"Yo!"
"Shut up!"
-Waconia Brass
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"Friendship is like peeing you're pants. Everyone can see it, but only you get that warm fuzzy feeling that trickles down your leg."
-David
:iconpsyping:
...
That sounds dangerous. =p
Oh well, I'll see what it becomes like. :)

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I'm never serious. Seriously.

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